Sable Crescents
The scintillating sunset scatters across,
The sable saffron panorama pauses,
The shimmering sable crescents rest under,
The rain sprinkles over
Anteceded by the growling thunder,
The cloud 13 clashes with cloud 9
The suns ejaculate the Prisms of Poignance
Dense and tense
The crescents collapse
It would be rare if anyone got it, this poem is about dark circles and tears
nice..
I didn’t get what do you mean by “The cloud 13 clashes with cloud 9″…as in the context of this with the main body..
By: anurag on 9 December, 2009
at 10:52 PM
Good use of vocabulary!!
By: cutestangel on 9 December, 2009
at 10:58 PM
never read a poetry like this
By: Dan* on 9 December, 2009
at 11:10 PM
It read better without imagining the dark circles or tears.
By: Miss M on 15 December, 2009
at 5:42 PM
Wow, that was for dark circles?… neat…
Keeo it coming…
By: Shashank on 23 January, 2010
at 3:55 PM
a good one i felt…
By: nishad on 24 January, 2010
at 1:47 AM
well written.
By: cutestangel on 24 January, 2010
at 3:57 AM
superb!!love ur blog!!
By: sakhi1 on 1 February, 2010
at 12:11 PM
nyc vocabulary…and da nicest blog..
By: Muhammad Ahmed on 8 February, 2010
at 9:27 PM
Nice poetry man…keep it up..:) Expecting more of this..:)
By: Vamsi on 9 February, 2010
at 6:59 AM
I need to chk my dictioanary to appriciate it all but written intelligently for sure…
rhyming well, sounds well and describe the sceneric beauty of rainfall in sunset…need little more of length…or else..brilliant one
By: manish rout on 9 February, 2010
at 9:45 AM
its g8 brilliant thinking………which will help to develop their g8 future
By: shaikna on 9 February, 2010
at 11:37 AM
Just want to say one word..
MIND BLOWING!
Keep it up!
By: Rohit Rajpal on 9 February, 2010
at 5:37 PM
a very great poem
By: Vinayak on 9 February, 2010
at 9:37 PM
Interesting concept.
By: cutestangel on 10 February, 2010
at 4:26 AM
Nicely written……
Keep Writing
By: Vijay on 10 February, 2010
at 11:01 PM
that’s a concrete and noble poetry! liked it..
keep up the good work..
By: ramaraobobby on 11 February, 2010
at 2:20 AM
For a layman like me, It’s always best to ask the Poet “What on earth are you talking about mate”.
Glad that you had a disclaimer
By: Vinod Iyer on 11 February, 2010
at 4:08 PM
thnx….keep visiting..!!
By: sakhi1 on 11 February, 2010
at 10:42 PM